One bright
sunny day I built a super sub. Oh who am
I? Well I'm Will Johns I'm 11 years old
and I'm sort of tall for my age and I'm kind of scrawny too which does come in
handy. Well this is the time I had an
undersea adventure. "Well"
I said. "Time to g..." Newt Man was asleep in the sub!!! I really hoped I was hallucinating so I
closed my eyes and rubbed hard but when I opened them he was still there
"Oh well" I said "I'm going whether he's coming or not!" So I got in and closed the hatch. After sinking some 40 feet or so an
explosion rocked the sub we were in a old minefield!! The explosion woke Newt man up his eyes grew
wider and wider as he looked around.
"What am I doing here!?" He yelled. "You are in my super sub." I told
him "But now I have to steer us out of this minefield!" I said. So I got us out safely and went even
deeper. So deep in fact we saw an angler
fish!! So I shot a tiny bomb in to its
mouth and the angler fish exploded into a lot of little pieces! (Ha-Ha-Ha :D). Soon I
had to do the same to a shark. About an
hour later We saw a cave and I went in an surfaced the sub and saw a huge sea
serpent!!!! It was seaweed green and big
pincers the size of school buses!! Its
eyes were a sickly yellow and were as big as bicycle wheels!! I screamed and Newt Man yelled I'll admit we
looked pretty silly yelling and screaming.
So we shot out of the cave but the serpent followed! I shot two torpedoes
and they left huge gashes in the serpent's hide green blood spurted out but the
serpent hardly seemed fazed!! Then the
serpent rammed into the sub knocking out its thrusters! I put on a very deep diving suit then Newt
man handed me a harpoon and wished me good luck. Then I climbed out of the sub and harpooned
the serpent's head and killed it. Then I pulled out my tool kit and went to
work fixing the thrusters. When the thrusters were finally fixed
I was almost out of oxygen! So I got
back in the sub and pulled off my diving suit.
After we shot away from Serpent cave I said "Now to do what I came
here to do." I switched on the subs
digger claws and dug really deep soon I came across diamonds! "Great!" I said "Cool"
said Newt Man. Soon after we collected
all the diamonds we went to the surface and me and Newt Man teamed up and
fought crime after I invented a Iron man like suit.
The End
so much excitement! I love your stories. You are a writer with an interesting point of view. LOL!! xoxo
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